Below is the first cut of my music video it is only the beginning section and I am still working on the next section of the video. Please comment below giving your feedback to my first draft.
love it so far katie, i think you just need to make it more clear at the beginning that they are about to argue or why they argue :) fabulous camera work there, must be a proper professional camera!!
I really like the idea and the story line is set out really well with the beat matching with the actions of the characters like the build up to the chorus when they are fighting in the car, but some parts are a bit random with the flowers, apart from that I love it :)
Obviously there is still quite a lot more to do. I like the footage so far, I would perhaps put in a close up of the hands whilst boxing. I would also be careful not to over work your video - there could be the temptation to put in too many locations/events etc at the expensive of your storyline.
love it so far katie, i think you just need to make it more clear at the beginning that they are about to argue or why they argue :) fabulous camera work there, must be a proper professional camera!!
ReplyDeleteI really like the idea and the story line is set out really well with the beat matching with the actions of the characters like the build up to the chorus when they are fighting in the car, but some parts are a bit random with the flowers, apart from that I love it :)
ReplyDeleteObviously there is still quite a lot more to do. I like the footage so far, I would perhaps put in a close up of the hands whilst boxing. I would also be careful not to over work your video - there could be the temptation to put in too many locations/events etc at the expensive of your storyline.
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